Comments on: FEEDBACK By: Kevin M. White

By: Kevin M White

Kevin M White — Wed, 04 Mar 2009 15:53:35 +0000

Thanks everyone for the comments!!

By: Deborah

Deborah — Fri, 20 Feb 2009 19:16:30 +0000

Mmmm…I can’t wait to find out of there is a reason for her stalking

By: Michael A. Kechula

Michael A. Kechula — Sat, 14 Feb 2009 01:05:16 +0000

Neat tale. Terrific concept: stalking via computer. Nice how she invites herself into his life at the end. Now you have to write another story about their encounter. I can hardly wait. Also, there’s a moral to this cleverly conceived tale: no matter where you see them, erase all comments from Helen before you read them.

By: Angel Zapata

Angel Zapata — Fri, 13 Feb 2009 21:11:16 +0000

Really good. I can’t wait to read your next story, or should I say, I’m eager to drink in your words. Love, Helen

By: Lori Titus

Lori Titus — Fri, 13 Feb 2009 14:26:31 +0000

Loved this! I agree with Grant, I like the website names too.

By: Bob Eccles

Bob Eccles — Fri, 13 Feb 2009 14:05:27 +0000

I enjoyed this! It left me wondering what happened later.

By: R Morgan

R Morgan — Fri, 13 Feb 2009 09:08:05 +0000

I liked the names of the webzines too What I particularly liked is that it shows how little someone has to do to to creep out a more retiring person. Reminded me a bit of my father in law

By: Grant Wamack

Grant Wamack — Fri, 13 Feb 2009 05:34:54 +0000

Nice story.Also,I enjoyed the names of the fake webzines.