Comments on: REPERCUSSIONS By: Sean Michael Smith

By: Alan W. Davidson

Alan W. Davidson — Tue, 05 May 2009 20:47:24 +0000

That was really an unexpected ending…well done, Sean!

By: Lori Titus

Lori Titus — Tue, 05 May 2009 16:37:57 +0000

Ok I can guess who that was.

By: Sean Michael Smith

Sean Michael Smith — Tue, 05 May 2009 14:47:41 +0000

Thanks everyone for the encouragement. I ALMOST didn’t publish this story because someone very dear to me said it was “complete trash.” Glad I didn’t listen.

By: Lori Titus

Lori Titus — Tue, 05 May 2009 14:07:17 +0000

I really liked this. I wasn’t sure what to think was going to happen, but the ending was a surprise. Watching him shoot himself will definately do a number on her….and, um, kind of iffy when she tries to explain what happened to him to the police and other interested parties.

By: Bob Eccles

Bob Eccles — Tue, 05 May 2009 13:03:08 +0000

Yep, I’d say that would do a number on her.

By: Jamie Eyberg

Jamie Eyberg — Tue, 05 May 2009 12:04:01 +0000

So, there won’t be a second date I assume.

By: Joshua Scribner

Joshua Scribner — Tue, 05 May 2009 11:30:33 +0000

Love the story. Nice twist at the end and very wicked. To have a threesome with a guys two best friends is pretty bad, borderline psychopath, depending on the rest of the situation. If she is a psychopath, then the main character’s desired effect was probably not achieved. Nothing wrong with the story, though. It just really made me think about what went on after the story. Good job.

By: admin

admin — Tue, 05 May 2009 10:21:25 +0000

Thanks Graeme. I fully admit this isn’t one of my best stories, but there was something about the idea of a worse horror being traumatizing someone rather than killing them that I found too interesting to resist writing about…

By: Graeme Reynolds

Graeme Reynolds — Tue, 05 May 2009 06:22:36 +0000

Pure Evil! Bet Jennifer regrets her love sandwich when she has to drive back across the desert with brains dripping from the windscreen