LONESOME PINE by: Catherine J Gardner

As I carved our initials into the purple bark of the white pine, Danny hopped and complained that a needle had pierced shoe, sock and skin.

“Stop griping, I’m nearly done.” I flicked the knife closed and placed it in my pocket.  “If the heart vanishes by morning we have to break up.”

Danny snorted.

Two centuries worth of graffiti and Somersworth legend rose several feet above us.  Branches swayed as the gentle breeze billowed and morphed into a howling banshee.  Pinecones fell like bombs and, in succession, two split against Danny’s shaved head.

Blood trickled down his forehead. I clung to the tree as the wind howled along Old Wood Lane.

“Jeez, the local weatherman couldn’t forecast his way out of a snow storm,” Danny spat on a leaf and pressed it against his wound.  “I’m going.”

A horn beeped as tires skidded to a halt beside them.  Danny wrenched open the car door.

“Wait.”

He grinned and held out his hand as I battled the wind.  The Lincoln’s door slammed shut and we fell laughing into the back seat.

“What’s up with you two?” Jack asked as he turned around in his seat. “Hey, watch you don’t get blood on the leather, man.”

I checked his wound and picked out a few slices of pinecone.  It looked nasty.

“We should take you to the clinic.”

Jack groaned, Danny grunted and the Lincoln stalled.  Jack slammed his hands against the wheel, scratched the key against the ignition and let out a stream of expletives.  He got out and began kicking the tires.

“And you say I overreact,” Danny winked.

Danny shuffled out.  I followed.  The wind rushed through the old white pine.  Its branches rose up like arms and as they shook needles stabbed down.  If a tree can hold a grudge against a person then the old white hated Danny.  Spikes poked from his arms, legs, t-shirt and cheeks.  It looked as if he’d had a fight with an angry acupuncturist. Blood bubbled and gave his skin a purple tinge.

“You don’t look good.”

As he pressed his hand against the tree, to steady his balance, he sank ankle deep into the earth.

“Oh look,” I pointed, “the tree has erased my initials but not yours.”

Danny whimpered.  Where the needles had pierced his skin, branches were erupting. They were growing needles of their own.


©2009 Catherine J Gardner

Catherine J Gardner is a writer of all things odd. You can find her stories online at New Bedlam, Arkham Tales, and Three Crow Press. She also has stories forthcoming in Postscripts, Fantasy Magazine, and Space & Time. Her chapbook ‘The Sour Aftertaste of Olive Lemon’ is to be published this July by Bucket ‘O’ Guts press.You can find her on the web at http://fright-fest.blogspot.com.

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18 Responses to “LONESOME PINE by: Catherine J Gardner”

  1. Jon Gibbs Says:

    Great story. I loved the ending.

  2. Alan W. Davidson Says:

    Very creepy (and organic) Cate. Luckily the trees here don’t get tall enough to drop pinecone bombs! Well done.

  3. Bob Eccles Says:

    Nice story - ranks very high on the creep-o-meter!

  4. Carrie Harris Says:

    I will never look at pines the same. Unfortunately, I have one in my backyard, so thanks a lot for that. ;)

  5. Jamie Eyberg Says:

    I have 15 pine trees in my yard and one has a face, now that i am thinking of it.

  6. Mary J. Daley Says:

    Creepy - good story : )

  7. Rebecca Nazat Says:

    Always enjoy your work, Catherine. You know, I live in The Pine Tree State. *gulp*

  8. Cate Gardner Says:

    Thanks to you all for reading it. :)

  9. Katey Says:

    I’m really into this kind of animistic creepy tale… possibly because I used to talk to trees when I was a weird little kid. (Some things never change.) Love the imagery in this one, particularly in the end.

  10. Jonathan Pinnock Says:

    Great creepy story from the ever-reliable Ms Gardner.

  11. Graeme Reynolds Says:

    Really good tale Cate - excellent word economy throughout, evocative descriptions and a genuinely chilling story. I look forward to your next

  12. Cate Gardner Says:

    Thanks Katey & Graeme. :)

  13. K.C. Ball Says:

    Cate:

    That which does not kill us makes us stranger, huh? ;)

    Nifty piece of flash; I like it.

    K.C.

  14. Angel Zapata Says:

    Great read. And damn…I knew I should’ve cut down that pine behind my house.

  15. BT Says:

    I’m never disappointed by your work, you always deliver the creepy weirdness. Loved it.

  16. Samantha Says:

    I love the seperateness (warning: not a real word) of the narrator. She’s both observing and reporting and what is happening to her bf in a reportive, non frightened matter. very cold.

  17. BP Myers Says:

    Wonderful story.

  18. Natalie L. Sin Says:

    Creepy!

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