Comments on: THIN ICE by: Jameson T. Caine http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/14/thin-ice-by-jameson-t-caine/ Mon, 15 Mar 2010 18:04:18 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Violet Hilton http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/14/thin-ice-by-jameson-t-caine/#comment-4468 Violet Hilton Thu, 02 Jul 2009 13:58:15 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=915#comment-4468 Wonderful little tale! Thoroughly creepy and the end brought a smile to my face. Wonderful little tale! Thoroughly creepy and the end brought a smile to my face.

]]> By: Natalie L. Sin http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/14/thin-ice-by-jameson-t-caine/#comment-4050 Natalie L. Sin Tue, 23 Jun 2009 08:29:28 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=915#comment-4050 Never have I been so happy to be female! Never have I been so happy to be female!

]]> By: Samantha http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/14/thin-ice-by-jameson-t-caine/#comment-3760 Samantha Tue, 16 Jun 2009 15:18:43 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=915#comment-3760 I love female leads. very nice Jameson. very nice indeed I love female leads. very nice Jameson. very nice indeed

]]> By: Bob Eccles http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/14/thin-ice-by-jameson-t-caine/#comment-3721 Bob Eccles Mon, 15 Jun 2009 13:44:55 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=915#comment-3721 I really enjoyed this! Very creepy. I really enjoyed this! Very creepy.

]]> By: Benjamin Solah http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/14/thin-ice-by-jameson-t-caine/#comment-3706 Benjamin Solah Mon, 15 Jun 2009 03:59:42 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=915#comment-3706 I really liked this James. Creepy, with a nice twist. I really liked this James. Creepy, with a nice twist.

]]> By: dj barber http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/14/thin-ice-by-jameson-t-caine/#comment-3703 dj barber Mon, 15 Jun 2009 03:18:18 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=915#comment-3703 Nice twist. --dj Nice twist.

–dj

]]> By: Paul Edmonds http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/14/thin-ice-by-jameson-t-caine/#comment-3692 Paul Edmonds Sun, 14 Jun 2009 20:01:08 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=915#comment-3692 There's something about a bully meeting his demise that always puts a smile on my face. What a nice job you do of illustrating the terror a young person will endure when confronted by the monster of peer pressure. I really like this piece. There’s something about a bully meeting his demise that always puts a smile on my face. What a nice job you do of illustrating the terror a young person will endure when confronted by the monster of peer pressure. I really like this piece.

]]> By: Alan W. Davidson http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/14/thin-ice-by-jameson-t-caine/#comment-3689 Alan W. Davidson Sun, 14 Jun 2009 19:33:48 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=915#comment-3689 I found that the "pale white hand rising from the water" and the "crimson eyes glaring" really notched up the creepiness factor. The final line was classic. Great job, Jameson! I found that the “pale white hand rising from the water” and the “crimson eyes glaring” really notched up the creepiness factor. The final line was classic. Great job, Jameson!

]]> By: Jamie Eyberg http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/14/thin-ice-by-jameson-t-caine/#comment-3685 Jamie Eyberg Sun, 14 Jun 2009 16:31:45 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=915#comment-3685 Yet another reason I won't go ice fishing. Well done Mr. Caine. Yet another reason I won’t go ice fishing. Well done Mr. Caine.

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