Comments on: DOUBLE DEATH By: Adnane Rehane http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/20/double-death-by-adnane-rehane/ Thu, 17 May 2012 02:46:32 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Hakim bourbita http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/20/double-death-by-adnane-rehane/#comment-6757 Hakim bourbita Fri, 18 Sep 2009 19:08:58 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=930#comment-6757 I enjoyed your writing style Adnane. It's quite refreshing to say the least. :) Hope to read more from you. I enjoyed your writing style Adnane. It’s quite refreshing to say the least. :)
Hope to read more from you.

]]> By: admin http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/20/double-death-by-adnane-rehane/#comment-4004 admin Sun, 21 Jun 2009 23:52:37 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=930#comment-4004 I thought it was a great take on the vampire mythos. I thought it was a great take on the vampire mythos.

]]> By: Bob Eccles http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/20/double-death-by-adnane-rehane/#comment-3999 Bob Eccles Sun, 21 Jun 2009 20:32:45 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=930#comment-3999 I thought the language really added to the story and made for a very unique and enjoyable tale! I thought the language really added to the story and made for a very unique and enjoyable tale!

]]> By: adnane rehane http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/20/double-death-by-adnane-rehane/#comment-3982 adnane rehane Sun, 21 Jun 2009 11:48:13 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=930#comment-3982 Thank you guys for your feedback; it's was really very encouraging :) Thank you guys for your feedback; it’s was really very encouraging :)

]]> By: dj barber http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/20/double-death-by-adnane-rehane/#comment-3966 dj barber Sun, 21 Jun 2009 00:35:12 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=930#comment-3966 I actually liked the formality of the lauguage, giving the vampire age. Good twist on the death of a vampire, too. --dj I actually liked the formality of the lauguage, giving the vampire age. Good twist on the death of a vampire, too.

–dj

]]> By: Alan W. Davidson http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/06/20/double-death-by-adnane-rehane/#comment-3963 Alan W. Davidson Sat, 20 Jun 2009 23:16:48 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=930#comment-3963 I am glad you mention in your bio that you teach english in a foriegn country. That explains why your words are very formal in places but casual in others. I feel that it needs a bit more editing to flow better. I like the story very much. We can really understand what is going through the vampire's head. I like your description of his memories as a set of closed drawers that he is opening. Well done, Adanane. I am glad you mention in your bio that you teach english in a foriegn country. That explains why your words are very formal in places but casual in others. I feel that it needs a bit more editing to flow better.

I like the story very much. We can really understand what is going through the vampire’s head. I like your description of his memories as a set of closed drawers that he is opening. Well done, Adanane.

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