Comments on: BREATHE IN: By Sean Monaghan

By: Lori

Lori — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 17:45:34 +0000

Thanks for taking a look, Alverta! And God bless you too

By: Alverta Durand

Alverta Durand — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 13:19:27 +0000

Heah, what a nice site you have. I found it on Bing while looking for some baby items. Thanks and God bless.

By: Sean Monaghan

Sean Monaghan — Tue, 06 Oct 2009 01:23:23 +0000

Thanks Jodi. Back at ya’.

By: Jodi MacArthur

Jodi MacArthur — Sat, 03 Oct 2009 23:02:51 +0000

Great suspense. The fight scene in the end was written. I like reading your work, Sean.

By: Sean Monaghan

Sean Monaghan — Thu, 01 Oct 2009 19:30:19 +0000

Thanks Angel and Barry - I appreciate the comments. Exactly what I’d tried to achieve - suspense with a hopeful end.

By: Barry J. Northern

Barry J. Northern — Thu, 01 Oct 2009 19:13:37 +0000

I really enjoyed the way this played out, and the way things nearly toppled over the edge at the end, but pulled back for a hopeful ending for the characters. Nothing will bring back Claire and Daphne though, and therein lies the horror.

By: Angel Zapata

Angel Zapata — Thu, 01 Oct 2009 11:33:17 +0000

Wow…great suspense. Very low-key horror, but quite effective overall. It stressed me out for the characters. And that’s always a good thing. Great story, Sean.