HOWL: By Richard Godwin

LYCANTHROPY CONTESTANT

They had almost finished eating when he felt it. Like someone pulling at his sleeve, drawing him away from human company into the shadows.

Rachel leant across him, the edge of her blouse brushing his arm and she glanced briefly at him as her breast pressed against him.

“Lou, would you like more wine?” she said.

He held her gaze and knew the question that flickered briefly in her eyes and looked over at Don and saw the tired signs of a marriage that had hit sexual zero.

He read her skin like a secret map.

Outside the moon beat light into the room and a beam broke across the carpet.

“I think I’ll go,” Lou said standing.

“Bit early,” Don said.

Rachel put a hand on his shoulder.

“Yeah come on Lou.”

“You know, I’ve got things to do.”

“It’s another woman right?” Don said.

Rachel glanced in his direction.

“Shut up Don.”

“No I really must go.”

He went to use their John and it hit him. The taste of bile like rusting metal in his gut and the shadow of blood across his veiled cyanic eyes in the mirror. 

And so he left them standing on the porch staring after him.

He tried to get home knowing he didn’t have much time, not wanting them to see the change and know him, not wanting to be found out by those who dwelt in his day world, the world he tried to navigate as best he could when the sickness was not on him.

The light was now surreal and the shadows altered in the trees and he knew he was among the resident forms of darkness and their attendant feasting had begun.

And as he turned the corner the smell of flesh hit him in some avalanche of sensation and the craving was too strong.

He stopped by the bar and the murmur of voices hummed into the street and above them he heard the trill of female laughter.

He found himself among strangers who looked at him with a sullen hostility that he could taste.

“What can I get you?” the barman said.

“I’ll have a Bloody Mary.”

“Now there’s a man after my own heart.”

He looked at her.

A fading beauty with urgency in her veins, a smile that told of half forgotten pleasures, and he could see the tear marks in her skin and he could smell what it was she was thinking.

“Mirabelle,” she said, extending a hand.

“Lou.”

As he held it he felt the surge of her within him and what it was she wanted to feel and he could smell that she was fertile.

“I like the name,” she said, “get me another.”

He watched as the barman tipped tomato juice into the vodka and had to still himself, the smell was so strong. 

Mirabelle was talking but he couldn’t hear what she was saying and he noticed a guy over in the corner scowl and look away.
He wore a faded denim jacket and swigged his beer with resentment.

And resentment built in Lou.

Mirabelle was moving her mouth but all he could do was smell her.

“What do you think?” she said.

“Of what?”

‘What I was saying.”

“I think you’re on heat.”

She burst out laughing and drunkenly wagged a finger in his direction.

“Now you have a point,” she said.

The guy in the corner got up and walked out, casting a hostile glance in Mirabelle’s direction as he left.

“Know him?” Lou said.

“Ah forget him.”

He tried focusing on what she was saying but she was speaking a foreign language and he felt lost among men and hungered for the dark. 

It was too much and the blood was rushing into him in a torrent.

He stood up.

“Where you going?” Mirabelle said.

“Outside.”

“Take me with you honey.”

She stood up and staggered after him, her heels clopping on the tiles and she found him bent over breathing heavily, hands on his knees.

“Are you OK?” she said.

“Just leave me.”

“Take me somewhere nice.”

He was about to say something when he heard the bottle smash at the edge of the car park and Mirabelle turned and it was too late because it had started and he could taste the blood and he smelled the woman and the man in the denim was moving towards him with the broken glass in his hand.

“Git Mirabelle,” he said, baring his teeth at her and Lou felt it then, seeing his lips curl back.
She screamed but it was Lou she was looking at as the scream rose in her throat and he saw her run from the car park as he heard the swish of bottle in the air.

He ducked.

His attacker lost his balance and Lou grabbed him by the throat and saw the ripples of blood gather and trill there in some lunar melody and he tore his shirt from him and tasted him and defiled his body there as the light suffused the car park with some predatory glow.

And he drank of him and rose.
His mouth was awash with the fluids of the man who fell backwards now as Lou sank his teeth deep within his chest and pulled his heart from him and felt its rhythm beat against his teeth, the sharpness of razors in his mouth and some implacable hardness within him that drove him to penetrate deeper.
He held his head back until he did not move and he shook his heart from his mouth.

And then he rose his head towards the gibbous moon that lay lacerated by some trees deep in that alien sky and he howled.

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©2010 Richard Godwin

To find out more about author Richard Godwin, see his website: http://rgodwin.wordpress.com/

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5 Responses to “HOWL: By Richard Godwin”

  1. Ron Edwards Says:

    I really enjoyed this tale of wolf and woman …. Thought I’d share a quick one of my own. Read it like you are watching “True Blood”

    Evening Desire

    When you walked in
    my blood got hot.
    A stare transfixed,
    tied in a knot.

    Beads of sweat
    rolled down my back.
    I thought I’d had
    a heart attack.

    Before the night is thru,
    I’m gonna have my way with you…

    Red finger nail’s
    and legs so long.
    Your eyes said “love”
    my heart said “wrong”.

    The musky lust just
    filled my soul.
    Caution no longer found
    or on patrol.

    I have a thirst
    unlike a normal man.
    Will power that
    you won’t withstand.

    Before the night is thru
    I’m gonna have my way with you…

    Car door slammed
    I got my freight.
    The toll both guard
    just raised the gate.

    Passion went in
    to overdrive.
    I had my doubts
    that you’d survive.

    You said your name,
    I didn’t care.
    In birthday suit
    with such hardware.

    I’m not to sure
    who did who.
    This much I’d say
    I know is true.

    Before the night is thru
    I’m gonna have my way with you…

  2. Allie Says:

    Very cool. As always, an entertaining ten minutes from Mr. Godwin.

  3. Miss Alister Says:

    Since reading this at ATON, I appreciate more the mastery, the building of this beast that’s become more perfect with time: each lean sentence fat with effect and sensation as the animal awakes: tasting hostility and smelling thoughts and fertility. And who could not love ripples of blood gathering and trilling in some lunar melody prior to a sated howl? Bloody good, Mr. Godwin.

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  5. J F Juzwik Says:

    This is the first read of my morning, and what a start. The imagery here will stay with me, I think, until well after dark, as I’m sure was your intent. This has great suspense and it looks like it’s going one way, then twists and turns another way… This story hits the senses hard. Love it.

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