Comments on: FELICITY: By K.M. McElhinny

By: onipar

onipar — Thu, 01 Apr 2010 21:11:50 +0000

I love this! You do a great job of easing the reader into the trappings of your twist. It’s dark and creepy, just the way I like it.

Paula Ray — Thu, 01 Apr 2010 18:12:25 +0000

Great story, Hinny. Wonderful way to introduce your writing–so sweetly wicked.

Angel Zapata — Mon, 29 Mar 2010 00:06:40 +0000

Felicity sounds like a girl after my own heart…which truly scraes me! Great story.

Mallory M — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 21:14:22 +0000

Amazing Kara! So creepy

Bettielee — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 20:25:46 +0000

Creeptastic, Hinny! I feel bad for poor Sam…

Ken — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 16:10:39 +0000

Congrats, Hinny! Very nice. =)

Kerr — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 14:28:10 +0000

*It had to be perfect.* And it was.

Cate Gardner — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 14:13:27 +0000

Very, very creepy.

Ryan Hunter — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 13:18:46 +0000

I thought I detected a little Annie Wilkes in this girl. Very nice.

K.M.McElhinny — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 03:57:53 +0000

Thanks Effie and Ben! Thanks for reading!!

Benjamin Solah — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 02:52:52 +0000

Wow, that was really creepy K, and original too. I loved some of the metaphors you used.

Effie — Fri, 26 Mar 2010 21:29:43 +0000

Ah, this is absolute perfection, Hinny. I love the description, the active heat in her needs… very visceral, very hot… and chilling. Love it.

K.M. McElhinny — Fri, 26 Mar 2010 20:11:32 +0000

Thanks Shadow and Tyhitia! Much love to you both!

Tyhitia — Fri, 26 Mar 2010 18:47:29 +0000

Yay, Hinny. It’s much tighter and a lot creepier. That’s one sick chick.

Shadow — Fri, 26 Mar 2010 18:36:37 +0000

Loved it!