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TIMING IS EVERYTHING: By Laura Eno

Thursday, November 12th, 2009

“It’s time.”

Andira watched Borril’s face as he made that announcement, looking for any hint of indecision, even a bit of sympathy.  His shuttered expression held neither.  Normally, he wore his thoughts openly.  But today…today was not a normal day.

She couldn’t fault his attitude.  Andira had only herself to blame.  She broke the law, committed the murder, even though the victim was already dead.  In the eyes of the law, there were no exceptions. 

Perhaps Borril felt guilt from his involvement in the matter.  After all, her act of violence had saved his life.  She couldn’t have stood by and done nothing.  Apparently, he didn’t agree.

*****

Seated now in front of the panel of judges, Andira wondered why they bothered with a formal sentencing.  The result was always the same.  She mouthed the words from memory, having heard them often enough throughout her childhood schooling.

“This panel finds the defendant guilty of murder.  Transcription of consciousness will take place in two hours, suitable host to be determined by the Commissioners.  This court is adjourned.”  

Borril led her back to her cell.  Two hours of contemplating her toenails while they worked out the computations to have someone else do their dirty work for them.  Ironic that Borril would be part of that team today.  Andira tried to take a nap, but couldn’t still the restless thoughts.

In 2357, less than fifty years previous, transcription technology had been discovered.  A person’s consciousness, or ‘soul’ if one chose, could be displaced in time, occupying another’s body.  If the host body died, the transcript displacement caused the other to die as well.

Of course, that observation came by chance during an accident in the lab. 

The resulting furor by religious groups shut down the recreational use of it.  Then the Commissioners built a platform around the technology, splitting hairs with capital punishment reformists in order to hammer out an agreement with them.  Now people were sentenced to die hundreds of years in the past, sharing the same barbaric method of death as the host.  Earth’s peaceful society retained its unblemished record this way.  Andira snorted at the thought.

Could she have done anything differently that night?  She’d thought of little else in the last two weeks, sitting alone in this metal cubicle.  Her mind reluctantly played through the scene again, knowing that events wouldn’t change any.

Andira remembered the smell most of all.  It was the first indication of something horribly wrong as she walked through Borril’s front door that night.  A scream of fury echoed down the hallway right after she’d called out his name, but it wasn’t his voice. She’d stumbled into the bedroom after racing down the hallway, finding Borril on his knees, begging for his life.  A corpse stood over him, butcher knife resting casually against bones no longer capable of sustaining flesh.  A severed head carelessly dangled from the other hand, strands of red hair entwined about her fingers.

Everything happened so fast after that, and yet she could replay it all in slow motion now, relive it at her leisure.  The swing of the knife missing its target as Borril rolled to the side.  Andira picking up the burning candle from atop the dresser, lunging at the woman with the only weapon she possessed.  The tattered remains of fabric igniting, the singeing of hair as the head caught fire.  Staring at the sodden char after the sprinkler system shut off. 

Watching Borril back away from her as he signaled the police.  Her ignominious arrest for murdering a corpse.

*****

Borril came to collect her two hours later.  He led Andira to the lab and strapped her onto the table, really looking at her for the first time in two weeks.  A sliver of emotion slipped past his porcelain mask.
“I’ve gone over the calculations myself, timing it so that you’ll only have to spend a few moments of consciousness before the blade falls.  I wish…”  He stopped, unwilling to pursue the conversation any further.

“Get on with it then.”  Andira closed her eyes, waiting for the disorientation she’d been told to expect.  She hadn’t asked whose body she’d be sharing.  It hardly mattered.  A few seconds of awareness at most, before they both died.  Not worth knowing the particulars.

*****

The smell assaulted her senses.  Andira looked around the dank room in disbelief.  She should be lying against a chopping block, blindfold draped to lessen the terror about to befall her.  She delved into the mind of her host, retrieving a name.  Mary Stuart, Queen of Scots.

The years passed slowly for both of them, but by the time the axe bludgeoned its way to final victory, Andira had perfected her plan.  The next time she went after Borril she wouldn’t miss.

©2009 Laura Eno

Laura Eno (http://lauraeno.blogspot.com) has written two YA fantasy novels and a paranormal romance.  Her flash fiction has appeared or is forthcoming in Twisted Dreams, The Monsters Next Door, Flashes in the Dark, 10Flash, House of Horror, The New Flesh, Everyday Weirdness and MicroHorror.

IRONIES: By Laura Eno

Thursday, October 15th, 2009

WORST OF LOVE CONTESTANT

“You seem lost in thought.”  Trisha sat down next to her husband.  Mark had an old photo album in his lap, but his eyes focused on the view out the window.

“I was just thinking about Steve.  It’s hard to believe that he’s been gone for ten years now.  I wish you’d known him back then.  You would have liked him.”

Steve had been Mark’s best friend all through school.  They did everything together, were as close as any two friends could be, until their sixteenth year.  That summer fate’s cruel hand tore them apart.  Just starting his first job, Mark couldn’t go on the annual family camping trip with Steve and his family.

“Steve wished me good luck with the job, but I could tell he was mad that I wouldn’t go with them.  When he walked away from the lot where I was pushing carts, I felt like I’d just lost my best friend.  That was the last time I saw him.”

Mark shuddered at the memory.  Trisha put her arms around him, holding him until he relaxed.  He twirled the slim gold band on her finger, thinking about how lucky he was to have married her.

Trisha kissed his forehead.  “You can’t blame yourself for his death.  It was an accident.”

“I know.  But if I’d gone with them, maybe I could have saved him.”

“Come on.”  Trisha coaxed Mark up into a standing position.  “Let’s go for a swim.  It will make you feel better.”

Mark smiled at his beautiful wife.  Married five years and he loved her more each day.  She meant everything to him.  He couldn’t imagine growing old without her by his side.

A small dock stretched into the lake behind their house, a tiny rowboat the only thing tied to it.  The water was deep enough to dive off the end of the wooden structure.

Trisha chose to jump in, feet first.  Her progress was hard to track in the fading light and Mark had a moment of panic when she didn’t surface right away.  At last her head bobbed up, smiling at him.

“What are you waiting for?  The water’s great.”

Her enthusiasm made Mark laugh.  At times like this, he wished they’d been able to have children.  Trisha would make a wonderful mother.  He hurried to the end of the dock and dove in to join her.

The murky water blinded Mark for a moment.  A flash of pain stabbed him between the eyes, as if he’d drunk an ice-cold beverage too quickly.  It cleared almost immediately, along with his vision.  In fact, the water looked bright, like the sun shone high overhead.

Mark’s stomach clenched at the thrashing movement in front of him.  Trisha was in trouble.  He grabbed an arm and pulled her to the surface.  As they broke for air, he realized the arm he held onto belonged to Steve.

“Thanks, man.  I thought I was gonna drown there for sure.”  Steve coughed a few times, then smiled at Mark.  “Good thing you were here.”

Mark stared at his friend, the boy who drowned ten years ago while swimming alone.  Steve hadn’t changed at all.  Time peeled back the layers as if they’d never happened.  Somehow, the past was being re-written.  Mark was here on the camping trip.  Steve was still alive.

“You okay?  You don’t look so good.”  Steve peered into Mark’s face.  “Let’s go sit down on the bank.”

Mark allowed Steve to guide him to shore, not trusting himself at this point.  He felt weak and disoriented.  When they made it to shore, he lay down on the grass and got sick.

“Roll him over or he’ll choke.” 

Unfamiliar voices accompanied retching sounds.  Mark slowly realized that he was the one throwing up.  Opening his eyes, he found Trisha’s worried face studying him.  Paramedics hovered, strapping things onto his body.

“Trisha…”  His voice rasped as he tried to speak.

“Shh – don’t talk, just rest.  We thought we’d lost you for a moment.  You hit your head when you dove into the water.”

She patted his hand, her rings snagging his attention for a moment before his thoughts lost focus again.  He heard someone running down the hill behind him.

“Is he all right?”

A man’s voice, coming closer.  A blanket offered, spread over and tucked around Mark for added warmth.  The man’s hand came into view, took Trisha’s hand and held it.  Matching wedding bands sparkled in the light.

“Hey, buddy, can you hear me?”

Mark turned his head, stared into Steve’s face, an older version than the one he’d known.

“You gave us quite a scare.”  Relief colored Steve’s voice.  “I can’t imagine what my life would be like without you in it.”

Trisha stood up.  “The kids are in the house, still waiting for news.  I’ll go let them know that Uncle Mark is going to be okay.”

  
©2009 Laura Eno
 
Laura Eno (http://lauraeno.blogspot.com) has written two YA fantasy novels and a paranormal romance.  Her flash fiction has appeared or is forthcoming in Twisted Dreams, The Monsters Next Door, Flashes in the Dark, 10Flash, House of Horror, The New Flesh, Everyday Weirdness and MicroHorror.